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i walked a path. a downward spiral. looking back was meaningless.
     people tried to hold me. but they just phased through.

i was able to do it. almost with little or no effort. i was able to reach hell.
     but in the drowning blood of silence i saw a shimmer in my field of view.

a side of passion. a hint of madness. a tint of foxy. thirty-two flavors and then some.
     the perfect recipe of dreamy devious you.

from the beginning to the end you were a passionate and patient teacher.

you taught me various lessons. educated me. me.
     a misguided and grotesque creature.

how to live love and die, making me cry laugh and smile.

it all made me want to stop kneel and stare.
     into those brilliant spanish eyes that just don't compare.

meeting you made me stronger. because of you i'm further away from this destructive hunger.

i am less incomplete because of you. you're a true treasure.
     but not for me to keep. only for me to see.

a rare and beautiful teacher. i'm glad to have met you.
     if you did not exist, neither would i be.
©2008-2009 *devilmed
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An appreciation poem. A rock in life.
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yay salvation!

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Will u love the "u" u hide if I but call your name?
Will u quell the fear inside and never b the same?
Will u use the faith uve found 2 reshape the world around,
thru my sight and touch and sound in u and u in me?
I love the way this is set out... its a really great poem, very sincere :)

By the way, are you also a fan of Ani DiFranco? :heart:

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:boing: Reading Shakespeare's plays makes me happy :boing:
:boogie: Seeing Shakespeare's plays makes me positively euphoric! :boogie:
Thank you!

Um... I don't think I am... but that one phrase is from that song.. my xgf used to say that she was 32 flavors and then some.

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Hehe, I see :nod:

You're welcome :D

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:boing: Reading Shakespeare's plays makes me happy :boing:
:boogie: Seeing Shakespeare's plays makes me positively euphoric! :boogie:

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